Dokkosan

I went to Dokkosan last night.v(●´Ｕ｀●v)))))).......((((((v●´Ｕ｀●）
We sawnight-scape from there.
It was very beautiful!!I want to go to there again.ﾟ+.○o｡.((o(,,・｀ω´・)人(,,-｀ω´-)o)).｡o○ﾟ+

Kurea

I went to Kurea with my friend!!q(･ｪ･q)ﾙﾝ♪(p･ｪ･)p
We bought a lot of cloth!! I have no money now!!
But it is very fun!! I want to go there again!!ヽ(´∀｀)メ(´∀｀)メ(´∀｀)ノ

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2.0. Comments

2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog:

• http://writingstudioblog.blogspot.com/2007/03/cherry-blossoms-ichifusa-reservoir.html
• Date of post: 2007.5.16
• Date of your first comment: 2007.5.16
• Number of words in your first comment:21words
  
• Do you believe that was a good comment? Why or why not?
• Good comment!! Because I like dreamgirls!!
  
• ...
  

2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog

• Title of post with link: Hydrangeas
• Date of post: 2007.6.23
• Date of best comment: 2007.7.4
• Number of words in best comment: 29 words
• Why do you believe that is a good comment?
• I like his bllog!! I like Hydrangeas too. His blog is fun!
  
• ...
  

2.3. The best comment by a classmate on your blog

• Title of post with link: Kurea
  
• Date of post: 2007.6.28
• Date of best comment: 2007.7.4
• Number of words in best comment: 11words
• Why do you believe that is a good comment?
• ...I went to Kurea with her. So I am glad.because, her comment ;I was very interestung!
  

2.4. The greatest numbers of comments on your blog

2.4.1. The greatest number of comments on any of your essays
　link: My family

• Date of essay: 2007.4.11
• The total number of comments on that essay: 1comments
  
• Best comment on that essay by a classmate:
• Date of best comment on that essay: 2007.4.18
  
• When did you respond to those comments? 2007.07.11
• What did you do in response to those comments?
• ...
  

2.4.2. Greatest number of comments on any of your other posts

• Title of your post with link: Favorite place
• Date of post: 2007.4.18
• The total number of comments on that post: 4comments
  
• Best comment on that post by a classmate (Blogger ID):小MEI・K
  
• Date of best comment on that post: 2007.4.25
• When did you respond to those comments? 2007.5.1
• What did you do in response to those comments?
• ...I and her like Taiwan each other! We can empathize!!
  

2.5. Additional reflections on blog comments:

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1.3. 3rd essay (topic of your choice)

• Third essay I like touring!!
• 296 words (in your essay [250+])
  
• 2007.6.6

1.4. 4th essay (original perspective on Kumamoto)

• 4th-essay KUMAMOTO
• 254words (in your essay [250+])
  
• 2007.6.16

1.5. Best essay: Which of those [four] essays do you believe is [the best] & why?
My best essay is Kumamoto!! I want to teach about kumamoto everyone!

summer time

June 27
Summer time
This year, my summer time will go to America!! I am forward to about this event.
I want to do a lot of!! For example, go shopping, go sightseeing! So I am going to save
money. Oh-!!I must buy a swimsuit!! I want to swim in sea!! But I am afraid ,I don not burn!!
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Money

Recentry, I do not have money!!So I am very afraid!!I said my mother.(Please give me a momey!) But she said NO!!p(`ε´q）
I can not play anything!! I want to be the day the eagle shits!

DORAEMON

When I go to my frind's house, I read Doraemon.
It is very fun!!And cute!!(* >ω<）=3I hope that come Doraemon!!I want Dokodemodoor!!
It is very convenience!(〃^∇^)o彡☆

FIREWORK

I played firework with my friend.(●*'v`*人).o0
But we can not play!Because, blow is very strong!!
I want to be summer early!I decide that see the firework next year!!ﾟ.+:｡ヾ(*｀∀´*)ゞ

GEKIRENZYA

Last Sunday, Gekirenzya went to my part time job.(０*'Ⅴ'*●)ﾉｼ
They are very cool! Children were above thireself!
It seems very fun!Next time, My part time job will comes Pikachu!ヾ(＠＾∇＾＠)

Aso

Ｌast Ｓaturday ,I went to Aso. It is veru cooly!!I ate ice cream..+:｡（´∀｀）ﾟ.+:｡
It is very delicious!!After time,I want to live in Aso.It is my dream.★⌒(●ゝω・)ｂ

Umitamago

Last Friday, I went tto Oita.(●´∀｀)ノ~．
We went to the aquarium.It is very beautiful!!
I want to buy fish!!I am lovin itΣd(ゝ∀･)
I felt that Oita is veru confortable!!

TUTAYA

I went to TUTAYA. I rent TRICK. It is very fun!! I like Hirosi abe, Yukie Nakama.
It is nice caracter.(＠´ω｀):;*.':;I want to buy this DVD!!(☆´ω｀):;*.':

Sleepy!!

I am very sleepy! I don not know why I am sleepy.･ﾟ･(ﾉ∀`;)･ﾟ･
Maybe I do not sleep recentry!I should more sleep!!It is very important for good health!!★⌒(●ゝω・)ω･)(ェ)･)ﾉ☆ﾟ+.

firefly

I looked firefly!!It is two times! It is very wonderful!!And very fantstick!! Next year I want to see it again!.+:｡ヾ(o･ω･)ﾉﾟEveryone should look it!

tooth

I went to dentist. My tooth is very beautiflu!!I don not like cavity!And I was very sad!Because I can not eat sweet foods!!・゜・(PД`q｡)・゜・

oh!!

My hip is very painful. So I can not sit in chair.(*´；ェ；`*)
I want to clear up early.｡+｡ﾟｼ.:｡ﾟｸ::｡+ﾟ(つω・`)ﾟ+｡::ｼﾟ｡:.And I want to go somewhere!

Nagasaki

I went to nagasaki.☆:*･ﾟ(●´∀｀●) It is good city!!I ate chanpon. It is very delicious!!I want to go there again!! Next time I want to go Hausutenbosu!! ┃・+∀・┃

Lain!!

Lainny seasons

I don not like this season. Because, this season is damp everyday!

My hair is disheveled!! Every morning , I am busy!! When it is rainy, I watching a TV.

I have a free　time! I don not walk outdoor. I want to finish lainny season early.

And I want to come summer!! I hope that I look sun!! I can not wait next month!!

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4th-essay KUMAMOTO

Kumamoto has many many famous place, foods, and persons.(*´▽`)*´▽`)*´▽`)ﾉFirst, I write famous place. Kumamoto has Aso mountain. Everyone know it. It has caldera. It is big in the world. I often go to there. When I was children, I lived in Aso. Natural is very beautiful. Air is unclarified.ﾟ(ﾟﾉ∀｀｡ﾟ(ﾟﾉ∀ヽﾟ)ﾟ｡´∀ヽﾟ)ﾟ
I think that summer is best in seasons. Kumamoto is very hot!!But Aso is very coolly. Aso is very comfortable. But winter is very cold!! I can not live in there.(*´σｰ｀) And Kumamoto has Kumamoto castle. This castle built Kiyomasa Kato in 1607.He was king in Kumamoto. In spring, Kumamoto castle's cherry is beautiflu. You should see it. I think that it is important. (;｀･ω･)ﾉ ---===And Kumamoto has famous night-scape's place. It is Kinpou mountain Hanaoka mountain and Dokko mountain.Those are very wnnderful.Second I write famous foods.☆:*･ﾟ(●´∀｀●) Karasirennkon , basashi, Ikinaridango.Karasirenkon is very spicily .I can't eat it. But my mother said"It is delicious!"I can't understand her.Basasi is very delectable. i often eat it. Ikinaridango is wonderful food. It is very sweet. I eat engross it.But I must careful. Because, This food has A lot of suger. So I may fat!!
Kumamoto is very Wonderful place!! I like Kumamoto very much!!(*´∀｀)σσσσ)´Д｀*)　

Fukuoka

Last saturday and sunday, I went to Fukuoka.I bought cloth a lot.

Soon Summer!!!!

Seasons

My favorite season is summer. Because I born in this season. And I like ice.

It is very cold!! I like green tea ice!! And we go to in the sea summer.

This summer I can not swimming. Because I will go to in America.

I am very sad. I can not wait next summer. So I think that I am going to go pool.

I don not like winter. Because winter is very cold!! No!! Cold! No Way!!

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Third essay I like touring!!

My hobby is touring. I often go to traveling abroad and hot spirng touring. When I 18 years old, I went to Chaina. My first time tours did. We went to Peking, Shanhai, Keirin. These country were commonplace for me. Everything!!!I thought that I want to traveling abroad. Last year I went to Tai wan with my friend. We had various accident!! For example, We could not understand where to the train. so we got lost. Our hotel was very cute!! Western-style hotel. I was very impress!! I said "Oh!! This room is very cute!! " But my friend said" really? I don not think that" I was very shock!!! Next day we went to shopping. Taiwan's store was very cheep!! I bought a lot of cloth. My friendwas very surprise." You bought a lot of!! ." You bought a lot of!! Can you bring your barggarg??" But I was ok. I was very satisfy. And Last summer,I went to hot spring touring with my friend in Shimabara. We ride in ferry. It was very good. I tought that I want to ride it again. Shimabara was very nice place. Beautiful natural, Wonderful sea,and good person. Hot spring was very very good!! We were four times into it.There is not other people in hot spring. Only us!!I thought that I may be beautiful my skin!! Dinner was very delicious!! We said " Let's go to Shimabara again!!"This summer, We will go to America. I am looking forword to it!! If I go to there, I want to do a lot of things.I want to various place in America. I want to speak English very well. When I go to America, I want to many many learn!!I can not wait next month. Surly, good expealience for me.

I like my family(^^)

June 6

Family

I have five families. My father, my mother , my old sister, my old blather and I.

I like there very much!! My father is very kind. My mother is fun.

I thought that she looks like my friend. My old sister is good sister.

We often go to shopping. I like her very much!! My old blather often give me money.

He has a lot of money!! Oh!! I forgot him!! We have a dog!!

His name is kojirou. He is very cute.

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