school festival

When I was high school student, my high school festival do not interesting. Because, I want to held my class’s shop. But, my high school is very old then. So my high school built new one. Because of it, we can not held my class’s shop. I was very shock! When I was high school student, I thought that I want to held school festival early! But no shop! No foods! I did not interesting!
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KANPONOYu

I wene to the Aso with my mother. We went to yhe hot spring. This hot spring name's Kanponoyu. I was first time. This place is very good feeling!! Especially, I like The Sauna.This sauna is mist sauna. It is very good. Cost is very cheep! I want to go to there again. Someday, I think that I want to stay here.
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mega essay Kumamoto History

Kumamoto castle
Kumamoto castle is very famous place. this castle is very big in Kumamoto. And very beautiful.This year ,Kumamoto castle is beiyng 400 years. Before, The place lived king. His name is Kato Kiyomasa.There is his bronze statue near Kumamoto castle. When it was war, this castle burned. But Kumamoto castle was reconstruction again by people.In summer, this place appear NINZYA. Children and foreign people is very excited.

Soseki Natume
Soseki Natume is very famous novelist in Japan.He wrote many books during he lives. For example,KUSAMAKURA, SANSIROU, BOCCHAN. He came Kumamoto univercity in 1896. Because he was teacher. He tought his student a lot of things. Before he came to Kumamoto. He lives Matuyama in Sikoku. So, everyone do not know to live in Kumamoto. But he lived in Kumamoto for four years. It is very long! KUSAMAKURA write about Kumamoto's town.
Soseki Natume has landmark in Matuya, Kumamoto, Tokyo. But he is left only Kumamoto.Especislly, UTITUBOI's house is left image then. Now, thie house is being memory's building.

Tabaru slope
Tabaru slope is very beautiful place. In spring, this place come out cherrybrossam.And in May, the azalea blossomes are out. But Tabaru slope had very big war in Maiji.The war's name is SEINAN war. This war was for 17 days had been depeloped. Then the ammunition is 320,000 a day averages. In museum has weapon, ammunition, furniture them. Now, Tabaru slope place is very famouse placeduring young people. Because this place is psychical research spot. My friend said this place is very dengerous! I can not go there in night. Because I an very scare!
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Meat!!

Yesterday My grand father and my grand mother went to visit my house. My lunch is very goges. I ate very expensive meat. it is very delicious.I did not eat lomg time. So I felt very glad!!
I like meat very much. I said grand mother ,I want to eat it again. She and me were promise. Next time let's go to the Yakiniku. I want to go to there early.And I will eat a lot of meat. I will may fat!! If I am fat because of it, I must diet.
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School festival

ast week I went to Takuma festival. I went to Ayaka’s live! Ayaka is Japanese singer. She is very cute. And her song is very well. So I want to meet her very so much. I was very glad. Because, I met her. And she sing front of me. I was very excited!! I was cry little. I want to go to her live again!! And I want to go to the Takuma festival again. Takuma festival has many foods. It is very delicious!! Especially, I like the Butazilu!! I am going to eat it. I want to go Takuma festival early! But I do not have club. Maybe I will go to the my friends club. 117words

hello shoko: I love kumamoto

hello shoko: I love kumamoto
Kumamoto has very famouse place a lot! And Delicious foods!
I like green tea ice! Surely, I like Ice shop in Hikarinomori.
I will take you there again!!

cooking: 4th essay -Kumamoto-

cooking: 4th essay -Kumamoto-
Kumamoto is very nice place!!
I like Kumamoto castle! It is very beautiful! I want to go to there!! So I will go to there with you again.

yesteday

yesterday, I work up very early. Because, my class was first period. I did not wake up early until summer vacation. So it is very difficult for me. I was very worry. But I can wake up.
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I love minnesota!

My summer vacation is very wonderful!! Because this summer, I went to Minnesota!! It was first time for me!! I was very fun!! I went to camp with my host family weekends. We stayed the hotel. This hotel is very cute! I was very favorite soon. And I ride the hose. It was very scare. Because it is very high. I thought that will be fail. But I was safety. Because, my hose was very slow. It is very fun. But I do not ride again!! This place is very wonderful.
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July 21　　　　　foods

I like Oyahodonn very much!! Especially cooked by my mother the best!! When I was children I often eat it!! I ate it once a week. I ask my mother. Please, cook Oyakodon!

If I said it , she surely cooked it. But reentry、She do not cook it!!　So I cooked it mine last Sunday.　It was failed!　It was not delicious!　I was very shock!! I want to cook good taste Oyakodon. So I try to cook it with my mother! I will say her. Please, teach me how to cook Oyakodon! I hope that will cook good taste oyakodon!

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campaas life

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Writing IIIc: Portfolio

1.0. Essays

1.1. Catalog	Titles of posts with links	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words	Numbers of comments
Example	Restaurant: Star of India	2007.03.13	185	1
1st (introduction) April (150+ words)	MY　FAMILY	2007.04.11	181	1
2nd (campus life) May (200+ words)	campaas life	2007.05.02	221	0
3rd (your choice) June 5 (250+ words)	Third essay I like touring!!	2007.06.06	296	0
4th (Kumamoto) June 18 (250+ words)	4th-essay KUMAMOTO	2007.06.016	254	1
5th (review 1) July 2 (175+ words)	fifth essays restaurant	2007.07.06	318	0
6th (review 2) July 16 (200+ words)	six essay Movie Stitch	2007.07.06	208	0
---	---	TOTALS:

Note: Calculate totals without the example.

1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

• ...I like 6 essays. Because, When I wrote this movie's essay ,I was very fun! And I like stitch!!
  

2.0. Comments

---	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog	cherry blussam	2007.5.16	21	bad
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog	Hydrangeas	2007.07.04	29	not bad
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog	Dokkosan	2007.07.04	30	not bad
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays	My family	2007.04.11	10	not bad
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2007.07.08	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	7	not bad
2.4.2. Any of your other posts	Favorite place	2007.04.08	39	not bad
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2007.04.25	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	37	not bad

* Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Additional reflections on comments:

• ...
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3.0. Typing Speed Trials (5 mins.)

---	Numbers of words	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial	40	2007.4.18
3.2. Best typing speed trial	80	2007.6.13
3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials	67.3	2007.7.4

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Catalog	Titles of posts with links	Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)	Number of words	Numbers of comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
1-01	Book review 1-01 White Oryx	2007.05.07	29	0
1-02	Book review 1-02 sarry's phone	2007.05.07	35	0
1-03	Book review 1-03 Mystery in Sanfrancisco	2007.05.07	31	0
1-04	Book review 1-04 Oranges in the snow	2007.05.16	35	0
1-05	book reviw1-05 Lucky break	2007.05.16	30	0
1-06	book review1-06 mystery in London	2007.05.16	31	1
1-07	Book review 1-07Dino's day in London	2007.05.17	48	0
1-08	Book review 1-08 New York Caffe	2007.05.17	20	0
1-09	Book review 1-08 New York Caffe	2007.05.17	19	0
1-10	Book review 1-10 Leonardo Dicaprio	2007.05.17	17	0
1-11	Book review 1-10 Leonardo Dicaprio	2007.05.17	17	0
1-12	Book review 1-12 Gandhi	2007.05.17	13	0
---	---	TOTALS:

Note: Calculate totals without the example.

4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

• ...I like (Lucky Break). First this book is very interesting. Second It is very readability.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation

---	Yes	No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar?	o
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	o
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week?		0
5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar?	o
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?		o
5.2.1. Do your labels include each of these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural)	0
"essays" (plural)	0
"quickposts" (plural, with no spaces)	0
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	0
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ... 14 labels	---	---
Which labels, and how many posts each? books 12 labels essays 2 labels	---	---
5.3. Links & media	---	---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures?	0
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?	o
How many of your blog posts include pictures or other graphics? ... 14 pictures	---	---
5.3.2. Posts with multiple links	---	---
How many of your posts include three (3) or more links? ... 2 links	---	---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	0
How many of your blog posts include other media? ... 2 medias	---	---

5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?

• ... I like six essays .
  

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:

• ...my blog is simplified. I wanted more cute me blog!

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors:

• ... I think that everyone should more longparagraph
  

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six essay Movie Stitch

when I watched the stitch's movie first time, I was lovin it. ﾍ(^ω^ﾍ)(ﾉ^ω^) I like stitch's character and personable.((ヾ(○･ω･)ﾉ☆･ﾟAnd He has a specially friend! It is Liro. She is very kind, active. First, Stitch was very bad! But Everyday he was with her.He liked her.…(((((*｡☆:･'ヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ*:･'ﾟ☆ﾟ･*: Also she liked his too.This story is comdy and serious.I until watched the movie,I laughed all along.Y⌒Y⌒Y⌒Y⌒Y⌒Y⌒(。A。)But Finally, I felt very sad.Because,If Stitch go back cosmo, Liro and Stitch apart each other!When thinking so, I felt sad!。・ﾟ・(pゝД；｀q)・ﾟ・But they did not apart! They could live togather in house!I thought that it is very happy!!♪(">ω<)っ)))^ω^●)Now, Stitch's movie has 3DVD.I want to buy this DVD!But I do not have money.(*´；ェ；`*) So I decid to save money!!｡ﾟ(ﾟ´(00)`ﾟ)ﾟ｡ I absolutely buy it.Surely, I will watch it everyday!!

fifth essays restaurant

My favorite restaurant is Gasuto!!v(●´Ｕ｀●v)))))).......((((((v●´Ｕ｀●）v I like Gasuto very much!! Because, Gasto is very cheap!!But my friend said In all, Joyful is cheap. But It is not delicious!ヽ(｀Д´)ノI do not like it so much.(；´Д`A ```I often go to the Gasuto with my friend. Before, I go to there once a week.I eat different food every time. Augratin, Omlet, Hamburg steak...etc. I have the food especially favorite of me. It is Sunny- side up hamburg steak!!ヽ(∀`ヽ●)(ノ●´∀)ﾉ It is very delicious! And very cheap! Plus sunny - side up is soft boiled!! After all, the egg is a soft-boiled. ( ´艸｀) It's cost is 380 yen at once. And 571 kcal.The recommendation is and there is another. It is broller's grill.This is cheap too!! It is 580 yen at once. And 600kcal.(≧ω≦。) Obtaining!! When I have no money, Gasuto is easy to go. There are a lot of kinds of the drink. In addition, you can drink all the drink. (〃^∇^)o彡☆ Now I want tohave food. It is special premium hamburg steak!! This cost is 780yen at once!! This prise is expensive for me!! But I want to eat it ! When Went to go Gasuto with my family, my father ate it. I gave it mouthful. I thought that hoe delicious!! I want to eat it again! I said my mother But my mother said<>I was very shock!! I thought that I will ask with my friend where is Gasuto. But my friend said I was shock again!(ﾟДﾟ)≡ﾟдﾟ)、So I do not have it yet. Before I go to America, I am going to ate Special Premium Hamburg Steak!!

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teacher

June 4 teacher

Bopheit teacher is very fun!! When I listen your talk, I feel very enjoy!!

I thought that I listen to more your talk!! And Jeff is like too!!

His house and my house are very near!! Someday I want to visit his house!!

And I know his son. Because his son and I were same junior high school!!

How fantasic!!

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